Miss Fix It

Tom Clancy by way of Dan Brown… le sigh

June 20, 2008 · Leave a Comment

A friend of mine is writing a military thriller novel, and it needs a lot of work, to say the least. We’ve already talked about various problems it has, including pacing, transitions, dialogue, jargon, and point of view, but it has enough potential and enough examples to blog about to be worth reading. Red pens notwithstanding.

Stay tuned…

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